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Enemy Mine, Possession,PG,Past Fic

Title: Possession
'verse: Enemy Mine, past fic
Character(s): The Shadow King, unnamed female
Rating: PG (for allusions to confinement)
Word count: 50

A/N: I tried to challenge myself, to write something whenever possible and to not place limits on myself. I hope that this turned out alright. 


The box rested idly in his lap, its feather-light weight belying its true nature. He kept it close, always; luxuriating in the quiet comfort that its presence brought.

Sometimes he could see her, a tiny feminine figure in white, dancing amongst the mirrors; wonderfully oblivious of her glass-prison.  

His, forever... 

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lilimist
Feb. 19th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
very lovely and gentle, such delicate imagery like glass itself, in so few words. I could see her too, and the feelings of intimacy & of possessing this treasured creature/thing really shone through in this pretty little piece ^_^
pixiesdelight
Feb. 19th, 2007 05:58 pm (UTC)
Why thank-you! *blushes*

Yuu do so have such a wonderfully pretty way with words, like diamond-stars and cut-crystal. I'm glad that you like it and particularly that the 'posessing' component came across more as intimate than overly sinister.

Now all I have to do is figure out who the hell she is, and why he's keeping her locked up.
originalpuck
Feb. 19th, 2007 06:57 pm (UTC)
Interesting-- she reminds me of a Tinkerbell-esque character, except that she strikes me as something less but more, perhaps an elemental, or something without the same concept of things as others?

Either way, interesting, and a good in-sight on the Shadow King's personality.
pixiesdelight
Feb. 19th, 2007 08:09 pm (UTC)
I can't really think of a good definition to give you, in so far as what she is -- the closest thing that i can really give you is that she seems to be the blissfully unaware captive of some creepy immortal voyeur.

I don't think that the Shadow King's intentions toward her, whomever she may be, are honorable to say the least.

Much thankies for the review ^^
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