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Title: Clouded Pathways (In which the Tale Begins Anew)
'verse: Enemy Mine, past fic
Character(s): The Shadow King, unnamed female
Rating: PG (for allusions to dark and dastardly things)
Word count: 160

A/N: I've posted this as something of a teaser for both Enemy Mine and the related 'verse mythology/lore series that I'm also currently busy on. This was sort of an experiment, an attempt to parody the traditional structure of classic oral/fairytale narrative. 

Oh,and a special thanks to everyone whose been such a great support. I really do appreciate all your encouragement!
 


Once upon a time...

A long, long time ago...

In a faraway land...

There was a castle (or a fortress) -- all high, reaching towers and smooth, sheer walls. And inside each tower were windows, and in one of these windows was a man. A Prince. No.... a King, spun from the forbidden desires and broken dreams  of a long dead people.

On one side of the place-that-was-a-castle (or fortess) is a merciless wasteland, a sea of pitch-colored sand that stretches as far as the eye can see, and on the other is something infinitely more terrible -- the Void, a carnivorous Nothingness. 

Once upon a time the man-that-was-a-King made a bargain. No... a wager -- a dark game, a cruel entertainment that was also a revenge of sorts. He wove a net of lies and deception, hoping to ensnare his enemy. All that was needed was for her to take the bait.

And, after years of waiting, she did... 

Comments

lilimist
Feb. 7th, 2007 01:45 am (UTC)
I finally figured out where this was, thanks to originalpuck ^_^ My comments won't be as intelligent as hers, unfortunately, but I wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. I especially liked the description "a carnivorous Nothingness". I too, could imagine it being told by fireside in a dark inn or some such, I think the storyteller tone works really well with this. And I'm excited by the idea of a fantasy story in which the lines between hero/villain are blurred, as they are not in so much melodrama (what I have gathered from what you've been saying about this series thus far, at least.) Anyway, now I have watched this community too, I can read anything else you've posted to it also. And I'd love to see more of this, but of course ^_^
pixiesdelight
Feb. 7th, 2007 10:10 am (UTC)
Firstly, you're icon is lovely. Secondly, your comment is just fine. ^^

The carnivirous Nothingness is pretty nifty, isn't it? Initially it was simply "a Void", but that seemed too incomplete. I'm also glad that the style isn't too...clumsy.

Yes, I daresay that this isn't going to be quite so... melodramatic, at least that is not my intention. I despise melodrama. *cough* Human nature leaves so much room for mistepping on its own, without having to create false obstacles.

Well, I'm glad that you liked it. :)

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